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New Jam, Please Give Me Some Feedback!

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Any feedback is super appreciated. I hope you guys like it!

The original concept for this song was written back in 2011.

I'm on Vocals and Guitars, and programmed all drums using Superior Drummer 2.0. My cousin wrote and played the Bass and mixed/mastered the track, and threw in some backing vocals.

Lyrics:

I know you think you got away.
You think you tamed a devil in disguise.
Stole off to another place,
But we both know that all good things must die.
Did I mean that much to you?
'Cause in the end, it all just seemed like lies.
Guess I could scream till my face is blue,
Six years man, how the time goes by.

I hope it was all worth it...
Yeah, I hope it was.

I watched you put your hand on the stove,
And like a child, you expect it not to burn.
Place a ring upon a finger,
Then expect to see an evil nature turn.
Turn your back on everything you know,
Now you wonder why you feel so lonely...
You have no idea what lonely is.
You knew where I was and never feigned concern.

I hope it was all worth it...
Yeah, I hope it was.

You will never change,
And I won't ask you.
You will never change,
Yeah...
You will never change,
And I won't ask you.
You will never change,
And I don't care.

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Anyone give it a listen? I know the first half of the song might not be everyone here's taste with the ska vibe, but the second half is basically straight pop-punk.

I'm pretty proud of the way it turned out, I'd just really like to get some other opinions. Thanks guys!

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