Guest Brendan on Hiatus Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 Scene Two Of A Jaded Love AffairFade in, start the scene, and draw the curtin.These windows have been boarded up andSecrets locked away.I hear you whisper in my ear"You'll poison my soul with your evil touch."I have nightmares of this street.Where winter was our killer,And I was living by this skeleton tree.These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.Is it fun the way you hurt me with your words.Let's make it known right now that you still care about me.It's sinking in and its sinking me down.But remember I still know the ways to make your chest hurt as well.You make it sound so easy to be happyBut i'm not sure their really is such a thing.These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siobhan. Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 once again...brendan has done it perfectlygreat song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brendan on Hiatus Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 i might work with a couple linesright now i like itand i got the music and i love it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest iameric Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 i like it, near perfect.p.s. are you just posting the lyrics to a ton of songs you've written, or do you just write like 1 awesome song everyday and post it, because it seems like you have quite a few up already, and new ones keep coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siobhan. Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 i might work with a couple linesright now i like itand i got the music and i love itare you gonna post it on backseat convo's myspace? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brendan on Hiatus Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 yeah it will be on the myspacelately ive been slacking on writing i had about like 5 pages of notes and lines and i just decided to finally put together a song outta themon a good week i could have a new song every night Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah D Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 I really like that, I want to hear it put to music. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbductedByAliens182 Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 I Really Like That!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest creep Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 I Really Like That!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest creep Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 I Really Like That!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryan Posted April 23, 2005 Report Share Posted April 23, 2005 There's really nothing more I can say that they haven't.. But I will.. That's awesome man, great job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brendan on Hiatus Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 Scene Two: A Jaded Love AffairYou Fade in, Start the scene, and call action.Quiet on the set, I can hear those secrets.Then you begin to whisper something."I'll poison your soul with my evil touch."I have nightmares of this street.Where winter was our killer,And I was living by this skeleton tree.These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.Is it fun the way you hurt me with your words.Let's make it known right now that you still care about me.It's sinking in and its sinking me down.But remember I still know the ways to make your chest hurt as well.You make it sound so easy to be happyBut i'm not sure their really is such a thing.These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siobhan. Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 i dunno, i kind of like "draw the curtain" better than "and call action"just my opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brendan on Hiatus Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 i cant get the range of singing with the curtin part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siobhan. Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 ohhh k. too high or too low? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryan Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 You mean vocally? Yeah that is hard.. I tried it, lol.. XD But that's like me singing man overbaord in a deep voice.. It's hard to say "over" in "so sorry it's over." So you have to go deep to high.. But if you try hard enough you can probably say it.. may kill your throat though.. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamjeffrey. Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 or just let your balls drop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryan Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 Yeah getting kicked in the balls gives you a high voice almost 100% of the time, but if you ever decide to have kids, you're gonna have to adopt. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siobhan. Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 hahaha that made me laugh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bryan Posted April 25, 2005 Report Share Posted April 25, 2005 If I set that kind of comedy to my lyrics that would be awesome.. <-- That made me laugh.. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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