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Scene Two Of A Jaded Love Affair


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Scene Two Of A Jaded Love Affair

Fade in, start the scene, and draw the curtin.

These windows have been boarded up and

Secrets locked away.

I hear you whisper in my ear

"You'll poison my soul with your evil touch."

I have nightmares of this street.

Where winter was our killer,

And I was living by this skeleton tree.

These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.

Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.

I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.

And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.

Is it fun the way you hurt me with your words.

Let's make it known right now that you still care about me.

It's sinking in and its sinking me down.

But remember I still know the ways to make your chest hurt as well.

You make it sound so easy to be happy

But i'm not sure their really is such a thing.

These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.

Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.

I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.

And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.

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i like it, near perfect.

p.s. are you just posting the lyrics to a ton of songs you've written, or do you just write like 1 awesome song everyday and post it, because it seems like you have quite a few up already, and new ones keep coming.

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yeah it will be on the myspace

lately ive been slacking on writing i had about like 5 pages of notes and lines and i just decided to finally put together a song outta them

on a good week i could have a new song every night

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Scene Two: A Jaded Love Affair

You Fade in, Start the scene, and call action.

Quiet on the set, I can hear those secrets.

Then you begin to whisper something.

"I'll poison your soul with my evil touch."

I have nightmares of this street.

Where winter was our killer,

And I was living by this skeleton tree.

These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.

Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.

I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.

And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.

Is it fun the way you hurt me with your words.

Let's make it known right now that you still care about me.

It's sinking in and its sinking me down.

But remember I still know the ways to make your chest hurt as well.

You make it sound so easy to be happy

But i'm not sure their really is such a thing.

These are the scenes we've painted perfectly in our minds.

Take me away, beg me to stay, please just make up your mind.

I swallow my conscience like it was just another pill.

And watch as this all unfolds into a terrifying mess.

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You mean vocally? Yeah that is hard.. I tried it, lol.. XD But that's like me singing man overbaord in a deep voice.. It's hard to say "over" in "so sorry it's over." So you have to go deep to high.. But if you try hard enough you can probably say it.. may kill your throat though.. lol

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