slapsean Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 so, i havent posted in a super long time but i lurk around everyday. anywayz i thought this would be the best place to debut my bad love songs cus i know everyone here has a strong opinion of what they think is good or bad. i mean theyre not terrible but theyre really amateur seeing as i just started to actually demo what ive been writing over the past year. its been a rough year for me personally to say the least but i digress. have a listen and tell me what you think, just looking for some constructive criticism. gotta get started somewhere i guess. https://soundcloud.com/sweetvictoria Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dean Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 These are not bad at all man, I actually really really like your songs. Your voice really suits this stuff too. If I had one thing to say, it's that I'd love to hear you push your voice more. You have good tone and it just sounds like you're restraining yourself, which works in some instances but there's some spots where it would've been great for you to open your throat right up and belt a few notes out. Please post anymore you do, I actually love these. Would love to hear final versions of these if you ever get a chance to lay them down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapsean Posted April 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 yeah im still kinda getting the hang of recording so for now im just trying my hand at demoing. when im putting down vocals they never seem to come out as good i can usually get them when im just playing for myself. my voice has come a long way from when i started getting more passionate about writing which was only like a year or so ago. but thanks a lot, man. ill definitely be putting more up in the near future! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'Ah...Lex' Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Digging it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapsean Posted May 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2013 so i threw another song up there, trying to be a little more simpler with the songs. more of just vocals and guitar, less effects and stuff. if anyone cared lel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maneatinglemons Posted June 24, 2013 Report Share Posted June 24, 2013 Awesome music man.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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