Guest Reggie! Posted March 14, 2006 Report Share Posted March 14, 2006 My ears are beating and my heart it’s been receivingThese sounds are often so deceivingSo kiss me kiss my eyes shut tightBecause I’m bleeding out my brain tonightWith only one more train in sightI’m leaving now with no regretsTo see us drown another dayIn confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€ÂI’m hearing words of othersAs hypochondria sets inWhile I see myself where they have beenI’m trying so hard to feel the thingsThat they have felt before meI’ve forgotten to just let myself beBecause I love every second of itMy ears are beating and my heart it’s been receivingThese sounds are often so deceivingSo kiss me kiss my eyes shut tightBecause I’m bleeding out my brain tonightWith only one more train in sightI’m leaving now with no regretsTo see us drown another dayIn confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€ÂMy girls are nonexistent and the feelings are the sameIn words I write to try and light an ice cube tray aflameI am in an upward free--fall In a rocky bleeding water--fallSo catch me softly because I know I cannot keep the beatOf waves that splash in natureSomething real set to completeI simply can’t competeMy ears are beating and my heart it’s been receivingThese sounds are often so deceivingSo kiss me kiss my eyes shut tightBecause I’m bleeding out my brain tonightWith only one more train in sightI’m leaving now with no regretsTo see us drown another dayIn confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€ÂHyper hypochondriacThis music’s messed me up--------------------------------------------I'm working on a third verse.Any comments are appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huxley's Hero Posted March 16, 2006 Report Share Posted March 16, 2006 Its good, but one question:"My girls are nonexistent and the feelings are the same In words I write to try and light an ice cube tray aflame"Was that just the first thing that could rhyme?The whole song is way rad, but then you come to that line and it seems like the song just looses something. Becuase it seems very real and very serious up until that point. Other then that, I liked it, very cool stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Reggie! Posted March 16, 2006 Report Share Posted March 16, 2006 thanks...i'll look into it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
surfbro16 Posted March 16, 2006 Report Share Posted March 16, 2006 your song title just reminded me of an inspection 12 song:Labels are for Cans (love the lyrics)Here's the mp3 if you want to download it...Inspection 12 - Labels Are For CansWhats with trying to specifywhat type of music we play?Why dont you just listen to itand decide if its cool or if it's lame?Must you insist on a title? I'd rather not have a nameWe could change in a second and be placed in a different frameLabels are for cans we leave it in your hands consider my advice:Standards aren't resolved they're often made of salt and broken down in time.We might turn heavy metal. We might go out on a limbWe might sing acapella for youit all comes from the heart- that's the thingHabits often lie practices will die its always been that wayLabels are for cans we leave it in your hands a proverb for today:Keep your defenses up be careful with the namesNever let your guard down cause nothing stays the sameLabels are for cans we leave it in your hands opinions are a wasteYour voice and ugly face are easily erased and vanish in the haze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Reggie! Posted March 17, 2006 Report Share Posted March 17, 2006 whoa, hey, thanks a bunch! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burntwonderbreadv.2 Posted March 17, 2006 Report Share Posted March 17, 2006 man, i like it a lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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