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My ears are beating and my heart it’s been receiving

These sounds are often so deceiving

So kiss me kiss my eyes shut tight

Because I’m bleeding out my brain tonight

With only one more train in sight

I’m leaving now with no regrets

To see us drown another day

In confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€Â

I’m hearing words of others

As hypochondria sets in

While I see myself where they have been

I’m trying so hard to feel the things

That they have felt before me

I’ve forgotten to just let myself be

Because I love every second of it

My ears are beating and my heart it’s been receiving

These sounds are often so deceiving

So kiss me kiss my eyes shut tight

Because I’m bleeding out my brain tonight

With only one more train in sight

I’m leaving now with no regrets

To see us drown another day

In confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€Â

My girls are nonexistent and the feelings are the same

In words I write to try and light an ice cube tray aflame

I am in an upward free-

-fall

In a rocky bleeding water-

-fall

So catch me softly because I know

I cannot keep the beat

Of waves that splash in nature

Something real set to complete

I simply can’t compete

My ears are beating and my heart it’s been receiving

These sounds are often so deceiving

So kiss me kiss my eyes shut tight

Because I’m bleeding out my brain tonight

With only one more train in sight

I’m leaving now with no regrets

To see us drown another day

In confusion as I simply say “I love youâ€Â

Hyper hypochondriac

This music’s messed me up

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I'm working on a third verse.

Any comments are appreciated.

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Its good, but one question:

"My girls are nonexistent and the feelings are the same

In words I write to try and light an ice cube tray aflame"

Was that just the first thing that could rhyme?

The whole song is way rad, but then you come to that line and it seems like the song just looses something. Becuase it seems very real and very serious up until that point. Other then that, I liked it, very cool stuff

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your song title just reminded me of an inspection 12 song:

Labels are for Cans (love the lyrics)

Here's the mp3 if you want to download it...

Inspection 12 - Labels Are For Cans

Whats with trying to specify

what type of music we play?

Why dont you just listen to it

and decide if its cool or if it's lame?

Must you insist on a title?

I'd rather not have a name

We could change in a second

and be placed in a different frame

Labels are for cans

we leave it in your hands

consider my advice:

Standards aren't resolved

they're often made of salt

and broken down in time.

We might turn heavy metal.

We might go out on a limb

We might sing acapella for you

it all comes from the heart-

that's the thing

Habits often lie

practices will die

its always been that way

Labels are for cans

we leave it in your hands

a proverb for today:

Keep your defenses up

be careful with the names

Never let your guard down

cause nothing stays the same

Labels are for cans

we leave it in your hands

opinions are a waste

Your voice and ugly face

are easily erased

and vanish in the haze

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