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When the world ends (I'm alright)


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New song I've made today.

If I lost my way would you help me get back home?

And if I couldn't speak would you help me find my tongue?

Or walk on by without blinking an eye

and telling yourself I'm alright.

when the moon and the stars collide in our skies and everything that we know comes crashing down.

If you could change anything, anything

And if you held the key to all of our problems would you solve them?

Or run and hide from the world to survive.

when the moon and the stars collide in our skies and everything that we know comes crashing down

Will you be there.

Or walk on by without blinking an eye and telling yourself I'm alright

I'm alright.

When The World Ends (I'm Alright): http://youtu.be/NYQAjAH8p78

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Not bad, I quite like your voice and melancholy style. Really reminds me of the band Staind. Your lyrics are rather cliché though and the guitar is quite bad, not thongrider dreadful mind. You're easily headed in the right direction, was pleasantly surprised not to see another shite Blink regurgitation. Keep hard at it and you have the potential to be good.


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Hey, thanks for the constructive feedback. It's usually a trashy comment I get on here lol.

I don't put a lot of thought into lyrics to be honest. I come up with a riff and then a picture/scene appears in my head to fit, then I let the words just come out and I kinda make do, I guess it's more of a demo

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