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[dildo69er]

Hey everyone id like some feedback on the instrumental ive came up with

eventually it will have lyrics to it and the instruments are yet to be completed but its been ages since ive looked at this piece of work and would love some outside ideas

thanks alot

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HWA72YFV

all feedback is greatly appreciated

[madgaz182]

the melody ounds like stocholm syndrome, especailly the " shou li go bck should i go back should i " part lol

[dildo69er]

i didnt notice that hahaha overall what was your opinion

also i think u mean asthenia with them lyrics